Task; to create an alternate chapter for the book Talking in Whisphers
The truck pulled to a halt, everyone jolting forwards before lurching ass against the cold exhort benches mounted onto the walls of the truck. Wire ties bound the hands of the prisoners - trussed up like animals awaiting their death. There was a cold, subdued atmosphere of feeling and submission; they knew they had met their end, the bitter wind blustered through the tough analyse structure - circled around their feet; almost as if the hounds of hell were already gnawing at their ankles.
Andres looked around himself, dark silhouettes of the other prisoners loomed around him - obtuse prayers echoed in his ears, a sound of women screaming and the sudden pick of a bullet - an end of a life, another innumerous slaughter mirrored in his watering eyes. His mind flashed lynchpin suddenly to the moment when he was captured...Why? How was he captured so advantageously? The thought drilled deeper into the back of his mind, manifesting itself, a cancer bed cover throughout him - punishing himself more mentally than the CNI could ever do harm to him physically.
The time had come, Andres knew it - a commotion erupted around the truck, sounds of soldiers boots on hard gravel surrounded the area, casting shadows through the lessen canvas skin of the walls. Guns were being cocked, the sound of a proceed chance before the final bullet strikes. Andres breathed deep, he focused his mind; he was cool and content, think rough the days before the war, think about the days after, this is yet a day....
he repeated to himself methodically.
Suddenly without warning the canvas doors on the back of the truck ripped open - casting great chasms of light, penetrating the loathsomeness of the cavernous...
this is definitely a good piece of writing particularly when considering the school level for which it was written. I was very impressed.
My one worry would be the relative use of such an essay for a registered user for their own study purposes.
Nonetheless it remains a fun, good example of creative writing.
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